Associate Editor Madeleine Wattenberg: As I’ve been working on my creative dissertation (a poetry collection that traces connections between industrial farming, toxic algal blooms, and a woman dreaming alone in her urban apartment), I’ve been thinking about the way the work of inspiration disappears in the poetry-production process. Epigraphs and robust note sections can cite specific sources, but often much of the reading behind the writing remains unnamed. “Inspiration,” which at its Latin roots is derived from “breath,” becomes a hidden gesture rather than an intentional practice. My manuscript is emerging within a large ecosystem of images and texts, but how can I make this inspiration system more visible to myself and to others?

One way to make inspiration visible outside the poems is to visually map connections between sources. I’m reading books that examine factories and modes of production, employ typographical disturbances to the lyric “I,” and probe the limits of dreamspace. These books soon lead me to other sources.

Below is an incomplete version of my inspiration map. As I created it, arrows and lines quickly intersected—no book offers just one thing, and nodes focusing on content and craft appear on a leaky continuum.

There are a number of programs that you can use to create your own map. I created mine using MindMup, but you can also use Microsoft Word graphs, Miro Mind Maps, graph by hand, or any other number of options that make sense for your brain. Creating a map has helped me better understand the relationships between my work and the work of others—and become more intentional in acknowledging the sources of oxygen and breath that animate my writing.

(To view the image below in more detail: on a desktop computer, right-click on the map and choose “Open Image in New Tab.” On a touch-sensitive screen, hold your finger on the image and choose “Preview image.”)

•	Madeleine Wattenberg’s Dissertation Inspiration Map
–	“Human” I’s: Split, Multiple, Leaking
•	Brenda Hillman’s Extra Hidden Life, among the Days (Wesleyan University Press 2019)
–	“The shorter ‘i’ stood under the cork trees, / the taller ‘I’ remained rather passive; / the brendas were angry at the greed” - “Angrily Standing Outside in the Wind”
–	“F & i look for lichen near / the train tracks” - Day 10
•	Canisia Lubrin’s The Dysgraphxst (McClelland & Stewart, 2020)
–	Dream/Awake
•	Christina Sharpe’s In the Wake: On Blackness and Being (Duke University Press, 2016)
–	“draw me the waking up, the grey hardness / of the mind pressed into the early hours” - “Dream #15”
–	Zakiyyah Iman Jackson’s Becoming Human: Matter and Meaning in an Antiblack World (New York University Press, 2020)
–	José Angel Araguz’s Review in The Cincinnati Review Issue 18.1
–	“I pulls off I’s toes and leaves them near the sea, I’s sea” - “Act I: Ain’t I at the Gate?”
•	Larissa Lai and Rita Wong’s Sybil Unrest (Line Books, 2008)
–	Poetry Matters: Neoliberalism, Affect, and the Posthuman in Twenty-First Century North American Feminist Poetics (University of Iowa 2018)
–	“cyborg consciousness / resist the transistor / sister”
–	“girls chant to the pigs: / no justice, no donuts!”
–	The Problem of Water
–	Toxic Algal Blooms
•	Joyelle McSweeney’s Toxicon and Arachne (Nightboat Books, 2020)
 	
–	“My attention is a fang that sinks through plasma / like a toxic arrow or a tooth in Coke. I’m fine.” - "Toxic Sonnets
–	Factory
•	Takako Arai’s Factory Girls (Action Books, 2019)
–	“In this place suddenly thrown into disarray / It is impossible to distinguish / Between what is garbage / What is not and what is still useable” - “Shadows”
–	“There is a factory floating like an isle inside / Its head turns round and round” - “Colored Glass”
•	Ariana Reine’s The Cow (Fence Books, 2006)
–	“My body is the opposite of my body when they hang me up by my hind legs” - “Knocker”
–	“Clean the language. Clean it.” - “Nico Said Excrement Filters through the Brain. I’s a Kit”
–	“Industry has an aesthetic.” - “Item”
•	Rosa Alcalá’s Undocumentaries (Shearsman Books, 2010)
–	“Factory is both fact / and act, and mere letters away from face / and story” - “Autobiography”
–	“They filmed the paint factory from the second story of our house, all those cameras looking out from us” - “Land Art in the Silk City”
•	Plastic
–	Allison Cobb’s Plastic: An Autobiography (Nightboat Books, 2021)
•	To read next!
–	Evelyn Reilly’s Styrofoam (Roof Books, 2009)
•	“diagram in which the edge of one center / becomes the center of the next.edgeof” - “Permeable Mutual Diagram”
Madeleine Wattenberg’s Dissertation Inspiration Map


Madeleine Wattenberg is the author of I/O (University of Arkansas Press 2021). Her work appears in places such as Salamander Magazine, The Rumpus, Puerto del Sol, sixth finch, Poetry Dailyand Best New Poets. She is a PhD candidate at the University of Cincinnati and serves as associate editor for the Cincinnati Review. 

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